Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Query Letters

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Version #1

Hook:

The game of public sex is hard enough to play when you got the family loan shark looking for a piece of your action, but when your internal twin wants a piece of the action as well, it can make you question your own sanity.

Synopsis:

Flat broke without a job, Jeannie was terrified of becoming like one of her uncle's deadbeat customers. Even though she was able to get a five day extension from her uncle, thanks to her ability to turn a word on its ear, she still faced the same problem: no money.

Sill, somebody up there must've had a soft spot for her, because no sooner then she closed her phone, a young man began chatting her up. Before she knew it, Jeannie was holding a card that was her potential salvation from a world of hurt.

After a brief but highly insulting conversation with Aissa, Jeannie was determined to try her hand as an adult performer. Not just because she needed the money, but more to the point of needing to prove her symbiont wrong and to prove to herself that she could play the game of public sex and still have her morals intact.

Line 21 is not just a story about a young woman's dilemma in reconciling her values to her new career, but it's a story about living with a free spirit that's crying out for adventure.


Version #2

Hook:

The game of public sex is hard enough when you got the family loan shark bothering you for a piece of your action, but when your symbiont wants a piece as well, it can make you question your sanity.

Synopsis:

Flat broke with no job, Jeannie was terrified of becoming one of her uncle's deadbeat customers. Even though she got a five day extension to get current, courtesy of her verbal gymnastics, she was still stuck in the same dead end with the same problem: no money.

Still, God must've had an ulterior motive, because no sooner then she closed her phone, a young man sat down next to her and began chatting her up. A few minutes later, Jeannie was holding a card that could just be her potential salvation from a world of hurt.

After a brief, yet highly insulting conversation with Aissa, Jeannie was determined to test her mettle as an adult performer. Not because she needed the money, but more to the point of needing to prove her symbiont wrong as well as proving to herself that she could play the game of public sex and still have her morals intact.

Line 21 is not just a story about a young woman's dilemma in reconciling her values to a new career, but it's a story about living with a free spirit that's crying out for adventure.

Thursday, March 10, 2011

When A Young Man's Fancy Turns To USDA Prime T & A

Perry was walking down one of the crowded corridors at the mall when he spotted Todd waving at him. Changing direction, he soon popped up where Todd was holding court at. Performing his trademark fist punch handshake, Perry took a seat next to Todd and unzipped his hoody.

"What is up my man?" asked Perry.

"Man, you would not believe the amount of fresh meat that is out and about at the mall today. I mean, there is some prime tender sweet young things flashing their wares for everyone to sample."

"Man, don't I know it. Can you believe the size of some of those tits that are being showcased today? I swear that it must be something in the food that makes them grow so fuckin' big that you can't help but stare at them, hard."

"Yeah, and can you believe how bullet erect some of them are? I mean, the t-shirts they're wearing just barely protects them. Thank God that wearing bras is not bad fashion statement anymore."

"Yup. And can you believe the amount of cleavage that some of this fine ladies have? I've been spending a better part of a half hour just walking around the upper level and looking down at the babes on the first floor. Man, what I wouldn't give to drop a few ice cubes down their shirts for an impromptu wet shirt contest."

Todd took a sip of his coffee and stuck out his hand as a hot looking babe came walking by. She moved a few steps over to the left and quickened her pace. Shrugging, he reached in between the cushions and pulled out a small hand mirror and spent the next minute gazing in the mirror and drooling at the hot babe until she disappeared into a ladies clothing boutique. Sighing hard, he put the mirror away and took another sip of his coffee.

"Some fine looking ass out there as well. So soft and sensuous, the tight jeans they're wearing just accentuates that booty to the point where you just want to touch and fondle it."

"Absolutely. The younger the ass, the better. Can you believe the ass on some of these fine looking young ladies? Good lord, I just want to spank the crap out of them until they squeal for mercy."

Todd and Perry both fell silent as they spent the next several minutes watching the mall reality show "Fresh Springtime Pussy On Parade."

Perry looked at his cell phone to check the time. Pursing his lips, he said, "Hey dude, watching all of these fine honeys walking by almost made me forget that I'm running late for work. So if there isn't anything else floating around in the nasty little brain of yours, I gotta jet."

Todd took a look at his cell phone as well, and said, "Yeah, I might as well get going too. My lunch break is about over. So where you hanging out today, Mr. Mall Security Officer?"

"Outside one of those trendy lingerie stores. Apparently one of those D-list celebs from the adult movie world has a meet and greet with her fans today, so they're expecting a huge crowd of drooling guys. You?"

"Unfortunately, I get to look at the world through my little Jeep Waggoner today, as I'm doing parking lot and perimeter patrol today."

"That sucks. Well, at least you were able to enjoy a little bit of spring time action indoors for a change, right?"

Todd smiled for a brief moment, and said, "Absolutely."